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Alright so your book..
The summary gives away just enough to interest your readers.
Your writing style is good
Your story line is good.
Although, maybe make your word count longer? I don't know how long your chapters will be seeing that you have only 2 on, but one of your chapters are really short (first chapter).
And I've noticed that you don't have a cover image yet.. Maybe get one.
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@Telichia DLR
Thank you soo much doll! I appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The sequel is up now if you're interested in reading it :) Your review is much appreciated love. Thanks again muah and merry late Christmas, hope you got what you wanted :)
Hi, uhm earlier on you did a review on my story Cross Country, I was actually wondering if you could possibly read it again since it's completed and also it's been tweaked a little. It would mean a lot if you could! No rush, it's Christmas and you need to enjoy it! Have a good Christmas doll
Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)
2/14/15