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Overall Rating:6

While there wasn't much of your story for me to read, I really enjoyed the eloquence that you write with. It makes your stories very good. I think you have a good story line that you can really work with, and you can take this story pretty far.

Your grammar and spelling was very good, there were only a few mistakes-

Your subject-verb agreement was off a few times
You had a few spelling errors that were more than likely just typos that you overlooked.
Overall I enjoyed your story and I look forward to what else you have to write. I'll definitely continue reading.

http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/56374/Secure/

Notes

I also realized that, after reading your friend's last two updates for you, that you've diagnosed with leukemia. I just wanted to say that I'll keep you in my prayers.
Stay Strong PVRIS
-Hopeful Directioner