Forbidden Love
A Goddess Of Nature. (6th Chapter)
Harry’s POV:
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“Niall, you loser. Stop trying to prove that your ball went into the hole.” Niall groans, while I chuckle with the rest of the lads in victory. “He’s right, mate. But you were close.” Zayn encourages Niall with a smile, while they both switch places to swing. “I’m thirsty, and this sun is killing me already. Harold, mate? Can’t we go inside for a break?” Liam asks in a whining matter, while I shake my head in a hyper expression.
“(I smile at him, before replying) Let’s just finish the game, Lee. I promise that I’ll treat you all for a huge lunch afterwards.” He nods, while Louis high-fives him in happiness. My friends are all from aristocratic descends, each of their parents are close friends with my dad. We were all raised together, studied together; our bond was more brotherly then friendly. Even though they are on a high social standard, they are humble to the highest extreme. I never was fond of arrogance and social classes, because money never builds character.
The moment that Zayn swings his stick to strike the ball, I notice two bodies approaching our area; but only one is able to steal my eyesight (http://www.polyvore.com/harrys_favourite_colours_mixture/set?id=128213179&lid=3755600). I won’t lie and say that she isn’t gorgeous, because that would be unsatisfying to her physical attraction. She sways her hips like a runway model, strolling down the green grass like a goddess of nature. Her perfect blonde hair bounces with her movement, some strands tickle her face, making her smile at the feeling.
“I’d like to welcome you all, and I thought you’d like a refreshment from the heat outside. Annabelle, please serve the gentlemen the drinks.” Her white pearls are perfectly aligned, complimenting her pleasant smile. Why am I even describing her in this perfect matter, she’s my father’s wife for goodness sake. I shake my head, stopping the sinful thoughts, regaining my stiffness attitude towards her being.
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Evelyn's POV:
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They four young men smile at me, each grabbing a glass from the tray. Harry shakes his head, then walks closer to me in a quick speed. He leans in to whisper in my ear, but I feel scared so I step a little backwards. My left leg reaches to step on the unbalanced grass, making me fall on my feet. I whimper from the sudden feeling of hurt, noticing how my left leg is burning from pain. “(He crouches down instantly, bringing his face close to mine; asking me in complete worry) Are you alright?”
I shake my head, trying to hide both my embracement and pain at the same time. “Come with me. I’ll help you back inside. (He turns his head to look at his confused friends) Boys, I think we should stop golf. You could rest in the living room, while I handle this.” They all nod instantly at Harry, as he stretches his arms to stand my up. I manage to stand, but once my left leg hits the ground, I whimper and burry my face in Harry’s chest. I didn’t plan on reacting this way, but my face feels strangely safe over his rigid chest.
“(He murmurs softly) It’s alright, don’t worry. Lean on me until we reach inside, okay?” I nod slowly, lifting my head off of his perfectly sliced chest. His eyes glow in mine with concern, as I make this moment as a piece of my permanent memory. The sunlight penetrates his green eyes, making them seem lighter like a creamy texture of green frosting. He lifts my arm and drapes it over his broad shoulders, while his hand cups my waist; pressuring me to his hip.“Walk slowly with me, please Evelyn.” I nod, while he guides my limping feet with his; across from the golf field. How could I hurt him and deceive him, after I just saw how worried he is about me? God, please help me.
Notes
So, let's begin discussing about our story characters; starting with Evelyn (Y) She isn't like her mother, obviously, because she has a frustrated conscience that is preventing her from being deceiving with Harry. But Harry cleared it out to her, that he isn't going to accept her anytime soon. Harry was stiff and rude to Evelyn, so it drove her to take her mother's tricky plan in action. However, when she tripped accidentally, she saw a new side of Harry, which made her regret the initiation of the plan. Evelyn isn't thinking for herself, and as you all noticed, her mother is the mater mind behind this entire position (Y) As for Harry, you all know by now, that he is attracted to Evelyn, physically so far. The way he described her in today's chapters, cleared out how he reacts when she's around <3 Harry talked about his friends, and how he never seemed to care about his high class materialistic life. He, like the 4 guys, is humble and genuine <3 Have you noticed how he was worried around Evelyn? How he transformed from his stiffness to a caring frame? <3 This is an indicator of something that is yet to be planted in the upcoming chapters <3
Questions for tomorrow: Slamming doors? Determination? Not wanted? An announcement? :O
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