Story Reviews
"One Direction and the Creators of Horn" Review
Piper charms
One direction and the Creators Horn
Grade: 6
The good things:
-Your plot is on point! It is very peculiar, but in a good way! There’s nothing like it.
-You have a ton of chapters! I like to read long stories.
Things to work on:
-Grammer and spelling. It wasn’t too bad but there were at least a couple every chapter. Nothing a little editing can’t fix ;D
-You didn’t really hook me in the first chapter. It took a while to get into it.
Would I recommend this to someone else?: If they were into that kind of thing, then yes.
One direction and the Creators Horn
Grade: 6
The good things:
-Your plot is on point! It is very peculiar, but in a good way! There’s nothing like it.
-You have a ton of chapters! I like to read long stories.
Things to work on:
-Grammer and spelling. It wasn’t too bad but there were at least a couple every chapter. Nothing a little editing can’t fix ;D
-You didn’t really hook me in the first chapter. It took a while to get into it.
Would I recommend this to someone else?: If they were into that kind of thing, then yes.
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