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“Ribs”

Grade: 9

The good things:

-Wow. Basically the only word that came out of my mouth after I read that.

-It was so intense and mind boggling I didn’t know after to feel after that. I didn’t know if I should feel sorry, or sad, or what. Seriously I’m still thinking about it and probably will be later on tonight.

-Your. Description. Is. Perfect.

-Your. Plot. Is. Life.

Things to work on:
-Basically the only thing I could find that was wrong was the summary. I understand that you wanted to keep it short, and I did like how intense it was, but I was itching for more and was kind of annoyed that I couldn’t read anymore. You probably going for that, but idk it was just a suggestion :3

Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Yes. Definatly.

Notes

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