Story Reviews
"30 Days to Die" Review
DrowningButBreathing
30 Days To Die
Grade: 7
The Good things:
-Plot=Amazing! I’ve neverrrrr heard of anything like this before, and that is really good.
-The chapter names. Very suspenseful!
-There aren’t 5,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 ‘I’s in one sentence. Thank God!
Things to work on:
-It’s a teensy bit “carrot-y” (~’-’)~
-Summary is kind of “eh”
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Yeah probably.
30 Days To Die
Grade: 7
The Good things:
-Plot=Amazing! I’ve neverrrrr heard of anything like this before, and that is really good.
-The chapter names. Very suspenseful!
-There aren’t 5,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 ‘I’s in one sentence. Thank God!
Things to work on:
-It’s a teensy bit “carrot-y” (~’-’)~
-Summary is kind of “eh”
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Yeah probably.
Notes
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