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"THE DEATH OF ME" Review
raylee
"THE DEATH OF ME"
Grade: 6.5
The good things:
-The story plot is amazing! It’s different and interesting.
-I love Harry’s personality
-It makes me want to keep reading.
Things to work on:
-The summary was pretty disappointing. A lot of people look for a good summary to decide if they want to read the story and tbh if it wasn’t for this review I wouldn’t have read the first chapter. That really lowered your grade.
-The first chapter wasn’t too great either, but the other chapters made up for it.
Would I recommend this story to someone else?:
Once you fix the summary :)
"THE DEATH OF ME"
Grade: 6.5
The good things:
-The story plot is amazing! It’s different and interesting.
-I love Harry’s personality
-It makes me want to keep reading.
Things to work on:
-The summary was pretty disappointing. A lot of people look for a good summary to decide if they want to read the story and tbh if it wasn’t for this review I wouldn’t have read the first chapter. That really lowered your grade.
-The first chapter wasn’t too great either, but the other chapters made up for it.
Would I recommend this story to someone else?:
Once you fix the summary :)
Notes
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1/7/15