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NessaloveA

Just a weekend?

Grade: 7ish

The good things:
- I liked main idea it was really different, I haven’t/seen anything like that on this website so that is good :)

-I like how the main character didn't throw herself at Harry at the beginning. I find it really annoying when they do that.

Things to work on:

-Kind of on the boring side a little bit.

-I don’t know where the story is going honestly, but I guess that is a good thing, because that means it will hopefully be unexpected :p

Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Yes and no.

Notes

holy shit long time no see.

i'm in school right now, but i decided to update because i have some extra time.

YOU SHOULD READ MY FANFIC: =D

AND YOU SHOULD FOLLOW ME ON WATTPAD: Niall_twerk_for_me

hopefully it wont be another century until the next update.