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"Hired for Harry" Review

AyeeeBriii

Hired for Harry

Grade: 5-6

The good things:

- I just kept wanting to read your story for some reason. I read 10 chapters non stop, which is good!

-Your summary was pretty good.

Things to work on:

-Your main idea wasn't really original. I've seen a quite a bit of stories with this plot.

-You pressed the enter button a lot on your chapters. So it looked weird.

Would I recommend this story to someone else?- Maybe.

Notes

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Comments

omg my story is the first on the list ahhhh :3

Perla1D
1/7/15

@JordynHoran
Cool Thanks

BEEbeautiful @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
1/3/15

@BEEbeautiful
I'll remove it when I get the chance :)

JordynHoran
1/3/15

@PUNK_CALUM
wow thanks for asking for someone to review my story I was actually looking for one and I saw my name at the bottom of the list and was like woah

but your name is attached and it looks like your a coauthor and it kinda bugs me don't mean to sound rude tho

BEEbeautiful @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
1/3/15

Can u review a story called save me by @BEEbeautiful

PUNK_CALUM @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/30/14

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