A girl with a dream

Plunge

PLEASE READ THE AN AT THE END


The good things:

-Duuuuuuuude this story is awesome. You actually made me get butterflies in my stomach.

-plot is the bomb.com

-I feel like a lot of stories have a main character that is shy, and perfect, but your main character isn't perfect and that is more realistic.

****WARNING SPOILERS IN THIS NEXT POINT***
-you've got a whole lot going on. You've got the problem with Harry but you snuck in the part about the storm. I'm afraid I'm gonna be worried about Harry and Cassidy and then bam! Wasn't expecting it. But I'm just guessing :3

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Things to work on:

-The prologue was boring and felt like it was being dragged on. It took a while to get through it because I couldn't focus.

Would I recommend this story to someone else: Yeah!

Notes

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