Reviews with ElizabethPayneStyles
I Saved His Life
Title: It's effective and goes great with the story!
Grammar: There are really minor errors, like ones that are over lookable. My advice is to read over chapters when you are done.
Spelling: Your spelling was perfect, love!
Plot: I love your plot so much. It's different and very unique. I really liked how she saved his life and he doesn't want her to die. Could I say a great story written with a brand new idea? A round of applause people!
Rate: 10/10
Grammar: There are really minor errors, like ones that are over lookable. My advice is to read over chapters when you are done.
Spelling: Your spelling was perfect, love!
Plot: I love your plot so much. It's different and very unique. I really liked how she saved his life and he doesn't want her to die. Could I say a great story written with a brand new idea? A round of applause people!
Rate: 10/10
Title- The death of me
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whatever works for you
Smut: No
Thank you so much x
8/17/14