Reviews with ElizabethPayneStyles
Teenage Dirtbag
Title: The title is good.
Spelling: There are a couple of spelling errors here and there. Just slow down a bit. It really got annoying because most of it was things that you can catch.
Grammar: Not to be rude or anything, but it looks like the rules of punctuation went out the door. There were periods missing and commas. Those are vital when writing as they tell readers when to pause. Just go over and read it.
Plot: It's good and different. I can actually get into it without any problems. I like how he has a secret past and only the boys know about it and she's trying to figure it out. Please update soon.
Rate: 7
Spelling: There are a couple of spelling errors here and there. Just slow down a bit. It really got annoying because most of it was things that you can catch.
Grammar: Not to be rude or anything, but it looks like the rules of punctuation went out the door. There were periods missing and commas. Those are vital when writing as they tell readers when to pause. Just go over and read it.
Plot: It's good and different. I can actually get into it without any problems. I like how he has a secret past and only the boys know about it and she's trying to figure it out. Please update soon.
Rate: 7
Title- The death of me
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whatever works for you
Smut: No
Thank you so much x
8/17/14