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Dance For Me

Title: Goes great with it so far!

Grammar: There weren't that much grammar errors. You did a really good job at describing and having detail. I actually felt like I was there. I also could feel the emotions that she felt.

Spelling: There wasn't that much errors.

Plot: I was only able to read one chapter, but your story is beautiful! I love it. It's just so different and unique. I especially liked how when she saw him, the world seemed to stop and she felt like she was rising, not sliding. This is one of my favorite stories now. Words can't even describe how I feel at this moment. This story really got to me.

Rate: 10

Notes

Sorry for the wait. Teenage Dirtbag should be next!

Comments

Title- The death of me
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whatever works for you
Smut: No
Thank you so much x

raylee
8/17/14

Hey could you review both of my stories My Little Secret and Luna and the Passionettes thanks

Miss Direction
8/17/14

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
- I don't like One Direction .. I love One Direction .If I start explaining why I love them ,we will have to open a whole history book .And right now it's 5:34 a.m here in Bucharest and I'm pretty tired .--I can't say I love them to the moon and back ,because if I say that ,then the moon is way too close ;)
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !