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Love At First Sight and I Will Always Want You

Title: Goes great with the story so far!
Spelling: There weren't any.
Grammar:Names of people should always be capitalized, no matter what, same thing with the first word of a sentence. You have minor grammar things that if you read it over, you'll probably catch it.
Plot: It's awesome. I love it. I feel like I'm there with the detail you gave. It seems like it's going to be really good. Please update!
Rate: 9

I Will Always Want You
Title: Goes great with the story so far!
Spelling: There weren't any.
Grammar: Same thing as before. Capitalization and minor details that could easily be fixed.
Plot: It's good. I really love how you write and put things together. I'm really drawn into the story and want to read more of it. Please update!
Rate: 9

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Comments

Title- The death of me
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whatever works for you
Smut: No
Thank you so much x

raylee
8/17/14

Hey could you review both of my stories My Little Secret and Luna and the Passionettes thanks

Miss Direction
8/17/14

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
- I don't like One Direction .. I love One Direction .If I start explaining why I love them ,we will have to open a whole history book .And right now it's 5:34 a.m here in Bucharest and I'm pretty tired .--I can't say I love them to the moon and back ,because if I say that ,then the moon is way too close ;)
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !