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...Because She's Bad

Title: It goes great with the story!
Spelling: There was a couple of spelling errors. Just read over the chapters when you're done. If you're not sure of a word, look it up on Google.
Grammar: There were grammar mistakes here and there. Just read over it to see where you need to see whether it's a period or a comma.
Plot: The plot is very original and I like it. I'm on the edge of my seat reading it and I want more. Please update soon!
Rate: 9

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Comments

Title- The death of me
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whatever works for you
Smut: No
Thank you so much x

raylee
8/17/14

Hey could you review both of my stories My Little Secret and Luna and the Passionettes thanks

Miss Direction
8/17/14

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
- I don't like One Direction .. I love One Direction .If I start explaining why I love them ,we will have to open a whole history book .And right now it's 5:34 a.m here in Bucharest and I'm pretty tired .--I can't say I love them to the moon and back ,because if I say that ,then the moon is way too close ;)
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !