Reviews with ElizabethPayneStyles
Cross Country
Title: It goes great with the story. I didn't have a problem with it.
Grammar: You are missing commas in some places. They are really important when writing a story because it helps the flow of the story.
Spelling: There weren't any.
Plot: I love how they met when they were younger. I thought that part was really cute! I especially love how she's still into stuffed animals when she's older. Your story is really cute!
Rate: 10
Grammar: You are missing commas in some places. They are really important when writing a story because it helps the flow of the story.
Spelling: There weren't any.
Plot: I love how they met when they were younger. I thought that part was really cute! I especially love how she's still into stuffed animals when she's older. Your story is really cute!
Rate: 10
Title- The death of me
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whatever works for you
Smut: No
Thank you so much x
8/17/14