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She Taught Me How to Love

Title: Explains it perfectly and is really great.

Grammar: There is a lot of punctuation missing and that makes the flow of the sentences horrible. Please go over and check for punctuation errors. Other than that your grammar was good. (Sorry if I was a bit harsh about the punctuation)

Spelling: Your spelling was good.
Plot: I like how he's hurting because he let her go, instead of vice versa. I especially love how he will do anything for his child. It shows the true quality of a man.

Rate: 9/10

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Comments

Title- The death of me
Author: Raylee
How fast: Whatever works for you
Smut: No
Thank you so much x

raylee
8/17/14

Hey could you review both of my stories My Little Secret and Luna and the Passionettes thanks

Miss Direction
8/17/14

Title : 'Dangerous'
Author : Perla1D
How Fast : Take your time babe x
Smut : Nope there's no smut .
- I don't like One Direction .. I love One Direction .If I start explaining why I love them ,we will have to open a whole history book .And right now it's 5:34 a.m here in Bucharest and I'm pretty tired .--I can't say I love them to the moon and back ,because if I say that ,then the moon is way too close ;)
Thanks ! And please be honest if it's good then I'm happy ,and if it's awful then okay ,I'll try harder next time !