AUTHOR'S NOTE (annoying fanfic moments, story reviews, random notes and SONG REVIEWS)

Wow! You've done a pretty good job! The chapter wasn't really short, or really long, and it ended in a pretty good way! The grammar was great and, although there was a lot of detail, you managed to describe it all really well! i can't wait till you introduce the other characters. I was pretty hooked and you've only put up one chapter, so that's good. Let me know when you post the next chapter and I'm thinking of subscribing!
here are my ratings:

grammar: 9.5
detail: 9.5
interesting-ness (or whatever lol): 10
want to carry on reading: 9.5

Have a nice day x

For those of you who would like to read His Or Mine?, here's the link: (It's by Missesonedirection94)
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/44876/His-or-Mine/

Notes

keep up with those scumptious requests, narwhal-directioners! x