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Title: The Big House

Author: Love_Life3

Review:

The title and cover are awesome! The title fits the story! And the cover is inviting! Great job on that! The summary. There is ONE mistake I found. In the fourth sentence there are two “was” so if fix that it’ll be PERF! Next, the amount of characters is great, but maybe you could who they are in the story? Like a character summary? Just like one or two sentences maybe? Not much though. But there good (Drew is sooooo HOT like goodness!) okay next chapters!!

I honestly really really like this story. In the prologue, there’s one spot where a apostrophe could’ve been used but other than that it’s amazing. The spacing is AWESOME! And it all makes sense to me! Some stories I read, make absolutely no sense, but yours does! Awesome job! I literally laughed out loud at that part where she’s asked if harry sister was Curling Iron! That’s was so funny! Chapter 1 is the same! Spacing is spot on. I only saw like 3 grammar mistakes, and again very easy to read and follow along with. I really love this story! I’m going to subscribe and rate 10! Great job all together! I hope you enjoy this review!

P.S if you want to find out where your mistakes are just copy and paste into a Microsoft word document and it will tell you! Much love baby girl!

Notes

Enjoy my princess! <3<3<3<3 :***** love you!