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Title: Never Look Back

Author: Bri Horan

Review:

Summary! Spot on! Simply gorge! From just reading the summary I wanted to read more! Also those two sentences that you can put under the title, if you know what I’m talking about those were also spot on! GREAT job!!

Character list. There are WAAAYYYY to many characters my sweet! If anyone knows me, one of my biggest things about reading FF is that there are way too many characters! There’s no way in HELL I would be able to remember all these characters when reading. Honestly, I was a subscriber, but it got way too confusing for me to keep track of all the characters and who there are, with, hate, like and what they do I had to unsubscribe. Keep in this mind, when making new stories, limit the characters. I mean you have 18 characters!!! Way too many princess! I’m not being mean, just honest. I mean you did ask for a review :)
Chapter review time!! I actually quite enjoyed chapter 1! It had a substantial amount of detail. Not a little but, not also not like A LOT. There’s quite a bit of grammar mistakes, I didn’t see any spelling mistakes, but grammar mistakes there was. But all of them can be easily fixed. So no need to really worry about it! But like I said, I actually REALLY like this chapter!

Out of 10, I give you 7. People seem to REALLY enjoy your story, so don’t let my little review stop you from writing! Much love… and enjoy!!!

Notes

Sorry for the long wait!! But here it is!!!! Love you girl!