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Young Minds, Young Love

Chapter 5

Avery's P.O.V
Shit, shit, shit, shit, shit, shit, shit, what the hell do I do? I could feel Harry's hand form into a fist on my shoulder.
"What the fuck did you just say?!" shit

"Get. step. Your. step. Fucking. step. Arm. step. Off. step. Her." By now Luke was right infront of Harry and I, both of them had their hands in fists and both of them looking as if they wanted to rip the other ones head off. I could feel my heart beat increase dramatically, my breaths were getting shorter and faster by the second. Harry could sense my nervousness somehow and his girp around my shoulder only tightened, allowing some sort of comfort.

"I don't need a little twat like you to tell me what I can and what I can't fucking do!" He snapped. I just wanted to get out of this situation but unfortunatly I had an arm stopping me.

"Im not asking you again. get. your. fucking. arm. off. her. now!" Luke had somehow gotten even closer to Harry and I, I tried to move away but Harry only brought me right back to his side, increasing his grip even more. I really wanted him to let me go because I reallllly don't feel like getting punched today and I know that by staying where I am right now...I will get punched.

Before I knew it, I got pushed to the side because Harry and Luke were now in a punching brawl. I didn't know what to do; everything was just happening right in front of me. Harry and Luke were killing each other, whilst the other boys were trying to pry them apart. I didn't notice that the girls were now by myside until Mo started talking to me, trying to calm me down. Before my brain could catch up with my legs, I was already walking over to the two boys. Just as Harry was about to deliver another punch to Luke, I grabbed his arm in a bold attempt to stop his assult. "Harry, please. Stop." For a second I thought I actually got the message through to him. I was scarred out of my mind, it's way different watching a fight in a movie or hearing about one, than being involved in one and being there as it's happening. A sudden sense of relife washed over me as Harry stopped punching Luke; then all of that relife came crashing down as fear and panic set in.

Notes

How are you lovely people liking my story so far?!?...
I know it's not a long chapter but I will update again tonight when I get home from work
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@imfuckedup
Hahaha I'm glade that you were shocked, I was hoping people would get the impression that she was pregnant but then be shocked because they are married. If you think Jessica is bad now...just wait until a little later in the story, she is going to be causing a LOT of drama;P Thanks for your beautiful comment!:) xx

OMG you don't know how shocked i am! I mean I thought it'll be a big deal what Avery's mom wanted to tell but I have never expected this! I think if i were Avery I would be really pissed so I admire Avery's behaviour ! She's so nice to everyone so wow . BUT HOLY HELL JESSICA IS THE BIGGEST BITCH I HAVE EVER SEEN! She annoys me as fuck! I hope Avery will punch her in the fucking face! I just literally can't find words to describe how much i hate her!
And the date omg Harry and Avery .. jeez i dunno what to say. They are so fucking adorable together and i hope Avery will say yes! COZ I WILL DIE! But .. God! WHEN HARRY ASKED IF ANYONE TOUCHED AVERY I HE WAS SUPER DUPER CUTE AND I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF HIM! He is cheeky, pervert , badass ( haha) , sexy, cute, and adorable at the same time! I NEED HIM SO MUCH ! AVERY IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE HIM
To sum up I loved this chapter ! It was so well written and I'm still not over the fact how many things happend! I can't wait for the next !
Oh and one more thing : sorry if this whole comment is nonsense but I am shocked and i can't think at the moment!
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Update soon I L-O-V-E it!

WritingAddict55 WritingAddict55
5/27/14

No prob! This is deffenetly my FAV fanfic i've EVER read!!!

It's_Chels :D It's_Chels :D
5/26/14