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Young Minds, Young Love

Chapter 4

*Skip to lunch*
Avery's P.O.V
"So are you guys starting to pack for camp?" Abbey's been talking about a camp and I have no clue what she's talking about.
"Ummm what camp are you guys talking about?"
"Well our whole grade is going on this shity camp that we are surposed to have 'bonding time' and 'get to know' more about the people in our grade. Trust me it's nothing special the only good thing that comes out of it for you lot is that you bitches, get to spend a whole week with me!" It doesn't sound too bad...I wouldn't mind spending a week with these guys.
"It doesn't sound that bad. Is it the whole grade that goes?" I only asked due to the fact that Im hoping that dick head Harry and his 'pack of animals' wont be going. I already discovered that I have almost every class with him and I just don't think that I would be able to handle him for a whole week.

"Yeah, the whole grade goes...even the fuck tards. I can't wait to spend the week with you" After that, Luke was just smiling at me. So I gave back a shy smile back, he held my gaze for a few more seconds and I couldn't help but put my head down and laugh a little as did he.

"Awwwww Luke...are you hitting on the new girl?" I could almost instantly see the pink go to his cheeks.
"So what if I am? I-"
"Hello ladies" Those words sounded like heaven and hell at the same time because I knew who's voice it was.
"Hey Avery." Why can't he just go away?
"Hey Harry"
"What happened dick head? Did you finally decide to leave the animal pack?" Rose must really hate Harry, somehow I get the feeling that not a lot of people like him.

"Actually I just came here to talk to my girl, why else would I be seen alive and talking to you lot" With that he walked over to me and drapped his arm over my shoulder, I honestly didn't know what to do because I wasn't even expecting it; he knows that I don't like him so I don't get why he was doing this. I was about to remove his arm, when I noticed Luke's hands in tight fists, he was looking directly at Harry with a very pissed off expresion.

"Get your fucking arm off her" I couldn't believe what I just heard, everyone else who was standing around stopped their conversation and looked at Luke, Harry and I. Everyone was as stunned as each other because we all fell silent.

Notes

So...chapter 4...who out of you lovely's like it??
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Comments

@imfuckedup
Hahaha I'm glade that you were shocked, I was hoping people would get the impression that she was pregnant but then be shocked because they are married. If you think Jessica is bad now...just wait until a little later in the story, she is going to be causing a LOT of drama;P Thanks for your beautiful comment!:) xx

OMG you don't know how shocked i am! I mean I thought it'll be a big deal what Avery's mom wanted to tell but I have never expected this! I think if i were Avery I would be really pissed so I admire Avery's behaviour ! She's so nice to everyone so wow . BUT HOLY HELL JESSICA IS THE BIGGEST BITCH I HAVE EVER SEEN! She annoys me as fuck! I hope Avery will punch her in the fucking face! I just literally can't find words to describe how much i hate her!
And the date omg Harry and Avery .. jeez i dunno what to say. They are so fucking adorable together and i hope Avery will say yes! COZ I WILL DIE! But .. God! WHEN HARRY ASKED IF ANYONE TOUCHED AVERY I HE WAS SUPER DUPER CUTE AND I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF HIM! He is cheeky, pervert , badass ( haha) , sexy, cute, and adorable at the same time! I NEED HIM SO MUCH ! AVERY IS SO LUCKY TO HAVE HIM
To sum up I loved this chapter ! It was so well written and I'm still not over the fact how many things happend! I can't wait for the next !
Oh and one more thing : sorry if this whole comment is nonsense but I am shocked and i can't think at the moment!
xx

Update soon I L-O-V-E it!

WritingAddict55 WritingAddict55
5/27/14

No prob! This is deffenetly my FAV fanfic i've EVER read!!!

It's_Chels :D It's_Chels :D
5/26/14