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The Perks of Being a Wallflower |AU|

Chappie 2:Lunch Time

Charlie's POV
The classes had passed and it was time for lunch. I had gotten my tray with my lunch. I had asked my sister if I could sit with her and Derek but they said seniors only. I figured i could sit with my old friend Susan but that didn't work out either. I had found a table in the back and sat there quietly eating my lunch and then Kayla came over to join me. We talked about Patrick's joke in shop class which was pretty funny. Kayla was extremely nice and out going and she didn't see as that kid who spent time in the hospital. After a while of sitting there and Kayla trying to carry on a conversation she saw two boys who were by themselves and asked if she could invite them over. I had agreed . She said
Hey do you guys want to come sit over here?
They had nodded their heads and joined us. They introduced themselves as Niall he was the blonde one with blue eyes and Liam the one with short brown hair and brown eyes. They were very nice but our bell rang and it was time to go back to class. It turned out that actually Niall, Kayla, Liam and I had the same class. Advanced English so we went down to the classroom talking about well everything.

Notes

Sorry if it is bad. Kate xx

Comments

I recognized u when I was looking for a good cover maker but then I checked ur stories and I gotta say this is amayziiiiing...keep writing why'd you stop?!!!!I really like this!

I love it! Just a suggestion. Space it out a little so there's more room, and you can read a little clearer. Like :

She took at back quickly,"Look,Charlie,I do not need your help with this notebook. This notebook is mine!"
She saw his beautiful bluish-grey eyes,but quickly turned and walked away.
Charlie couldn't help but think about her...
Her eyes
Her voice
Her accent

Make it:

She took at back quickly,"Look,Charlie,I do not need your help with this notebook. This notebook is mine!"

She saw his beautiful bluish-grey eyes,but quickly turned and walked away.

Charlie couldn't help but think about her...

Her eyes

Her voice

Her accent

It's up to you i'm just saying (: Other than that i love it ! <3

I see what you did there! Go #BritishInvasionDay!

@Erin_Elizabeth_Direction
yes,yes you are

J.J. J.J.
2/12/14

wow, wow, wow, wow, wow. I'm a co-author? hm.....interesting.