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The Perks of Being a Wallflower |AU| - Comments
I love it! Just a suggestion. Space it out a little so there's more room, and you can read a little clearer. Like :
She took at back quickly,"Look,Charlie,I do not need your help with this notebook. This notebook is mine!"
She saw his beautiful bluish-grey eyes,but quickly turned and walked away.
Charlie couldn't help but think about her...
Her eyes
Her voice
Her accent
Make it:
She took at back quickly,"Look,Charlie,I do not need your help with this notebook. This notebook is mine!"
She saw his beautiful bluish-grey eyes,but quickly turned and walked away.
Charlie couldn't help but think about her...
Her eyes
Her voice
Her accent
It's up to you i'm just saying (: Other than that i love it ! <3
I recognized u when I was looking for a good cover maker but then I checked ur stories and I gotta say this is amayziiiiing...keep writing why'd you stop?!!!!I really like this!
12/31/14