New Girl
Chapter 13
Niall p.o.v.
"Do you guys feel that?" Naomi asks.
"Feel what?" Louis asks her.
"That rumbling, I can hear it too," she answers.
"I can feel now, what is it?" I ask.
"I don't kn-" Naomi gets cut off by the whole house shaking.
"Earthquake! Get out of the house!" She shouts. We start going down the stairs, but I stop. I run back up the stairs, and Naomi is going through her stuff.
"Naomi, come on!" I shout.
"Hold on!" she answers. "I'm grabbing my mom and dads stuff,"
I go over and help her.
"Hand me the things," I tell her
"Ok," she says.
The rumbling gets worse and worse. Soon I'm trying to stay balanced.
"Thats it," she sighs.
"Ok, let's-" I get cut of by Naomi screaming. I look over and her dresser is almost on top of her. I drop the stuff on a table and push her out of the way so that my body is under the dresser. It falls over completely.
"Niall!" She screams.
"Go! I'll get out myself," I answer. She nods yes, but I can see her fighting back the tears. She runs out of the room with her parents things.
Naomi p.o.v.
I wanted to help him, but couldn't. I wouldn't be able to lift that thing anyway. I get to the end of the stairs, and the other boys are standing out side of the house, in the middle of the road, and a few others are looking at the top of my house with them. I run out of the house, and to the boys.
"Where is Niall?" Louis asks.
"Um, Louis, I think there are more important things," Zayn says, worried.
"What?" I ask.
"That," he says, pointing to the top of my house.
"Oh my God," I say. The whole top of the house is collapsing.
"There's someone in there! He looks like he needs help!" A man shouted, while looking at the second story of my house.
"Guys, I need your help," I start.
Notes
Cliffhanger? I can't really tell when i have cliffhangers.
Q'S
What will happen to Niall?
What does Naomi need help with?
Will Louis ever find out where Niall is? (Lol)
I will be very happy if you answer these!
~Naomi :)
Hey so here's my review for this one:
Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line
6/18/14