New Girl
Chapter 11
Louis p.o.v
I am walking to Naomi's house right now. I am actually pretty excited. I'm not going to tell you why though.
"Hey dude!" Someone shouts behind me.
"Hey Zayn!" I say. But I think I sounded too excited.
"Why so happy?" He ask.
"Secret," I reply.
"Fine. I won't interfere," he says.
"Really? Whenever I say that people they always ask what it is," I explain.
"Well, I'm not nosey. I never was," he started. "Except one time when my sister had a crush,"
"Why?" I ask.
"She's my little sister! And it wasn't that long ago. About, two, three months ago?" He asks himself.
"I'm not very nosey either, but when it comes to sisters, you gotta know!" I point out.
"Yea," he sighs.
"I think this next house is-holy crap," I say. Her house is huge. And I mean HUGE. It's a three story, and I think there's a pool.
"Is that her house?" Zayn asks with wide eyes.
"This is the address. 2700 Maplewood," I point out.
"Let's go then!" Zayn shouts.
We walk up to it, and it is awesome.
I ring the doorbell, and about a minute later, footsteps are coming down the stairs. They open the door.
"Hey guys, come on in!" She says. We walk in, and its bigger on the inside.
"Oh my God," I gasp.
"You live here alone?" Zayn asks. "Or, do you have like, someone else here with you?"
"Nope, got the whole place to myself!" She smiles.
"So, anyone bring paper? We can use mine, but, I'm just wondering," she asks, leading us to her room, upstairs.
"Um, I think there's paper in my backpack, but I'm not sure," I answer.
"Why'd you bring your backpack?" She asks.
"I don't know, we could need it," I answer. She shakes her head and laughs.
We are still walking up the stairs.
"When does this staircase end?" I complain.
"We are almost there," she answers.
"Look! I see floor! FLOOR HO!" I shout.
"Shut up Louis," she says, and I I stick my tongue out at her.
We get to the second floor, and she takes us to her room.
"Where is Niall?" Zayn asks.
"I don't know, maybe shoving a pencil up his ass!" Naomi snaps.
"What the hell?" I ask.
"I don't care for him. He's a fuckhead," she says.
Notes
Sorry for the language, but that's why it's rated NC-17. I gtg, so, me wills update tomorrow! Later!
<3 Naomi
Hey so here's my review for this one:
Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line
6/18/14