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Why I'm here

I wanted to start writing reviews because I read fanfiction more than I actually do my homework. I have gotten both of my stories that are on here reviewed. RealityRuinedMyLife reviewed my Larry fic (Secrets We're Hiding), and she sort of inspired me to do this. Another reason I wanted to do this was because I love helping people out and giving them adivise. The last reason I'm doing this is because there are so many reviewers out there, but I want to get my two cents in.

Notes

Comments

Could you please review my story: Butterfly Kisses.

I'd prefer it if you read all of them, if that's okay, I have patience that won't be a problem.

Please could you review my writing on: Grammar, spelling, punctuation, sentence flow, description and maybe the story line all together?

I'd like you to post it here.

It's currently incomplete.

Thanks hun x

M.SOPHIA
2/6/14

@WeyHeyItsTigerlily
Oh, sorry, I forgot. You can review any amount of chapters you want, really, I don't mind. I'd like the review to be posted on this story, and both the stories are incomplete. Thanks!

hvrrystyles
1/27/14

@zipadeedoodah
Wow, that's ironic, thanks for pointing that out. Hey, not trying to be rude, but to get reviews you need to fill out the form above.

Thanks!
xx Tigerlily xx

WeyHeyItsTigerlily
1/26/14

Can you review my stories "Indigo Romance" and "Anonymous" please? :)
btw, you spelled grammar wrong in the summary. Not trying to be rude or anything, just pointing that out :)

hvrrystyles
1/26/14

I.C.E. Academy
Its kind of short right now so all of it?
If it's any good I'm not sure if it's a good idea or not.
You can post it
The story is incomplete
Thanks :)