Story Reviews - Comments

Could you please review my story: Butterfly Kisses.

I'd prefer it if you read all of them, if that's okay, I have patience that won't be a problem.

Please could you review my writing on: Grammar, spelling, punctuation, sentence flow, description and maybe the story line all together?

I'd like you to post it here.

It's currently incomplete.

Thanks hun x

@WeyHeyItsTigerlily
Oh, sorry, I forgot. You can review any amount of chapters you want, really, I don't mind. I'd like the review to be posted on this story, and both the stories are incomplete. Thanks!

@zipadeedoodah
Wow, that's ironic, thanks for pointing that out. Hey, not trying to be rude, but to get reviews you need to fill out the form above.

Thanks!
xx Tigerlily xx

Can you review my stories "Indigo Romance" and "Anonymous" please? :)
btw, you spelled grammar wrong in the summary. Not trying to be rude or anything, just pointing that out :)

I.C.E. Academy
Its kind of short right now so all of it?
If it's any good I'm not sure if it's a good idea or not.
You can post it
The story is incomplete
Thanks :)

'Twins?' (I'm on my kindle so I can't put a link)
Only one chapter, so, I think you should read them all.
Grammer Mabye a rating?
Either one. You choose. But if you me to choose tell me and I will.
It is incomplete.

Thanks!

~Naomi

@Mrs. Storplikson
Just l like I told zaynlove, I will read your story one you fill out the form!

Thanks, love!
xx Tigerlily xx

CAN you read my story: 'Twins?'? I can't put a link and its literally brand new and I'm almost done with the first chapter.
Thanks!

~Naomi

@WeyHeyItsTigerlily
thanks

@ilyzayn1028
Yes, I can.

@Zaynlove
Thank you, and I will get on reading both of them ASAP.

xx Tigerlily xx

~The Fire in His Eyes
~ you can read them all, there are only 6
~You can really give me any feedback that you may receive.
~you can post on here
~incomplete

@Zaynlove
Once you fill out the form in the summary, I will review it. Sorry, everybody who wants one has to!

Thanks, love!
xx Tigerlily xx

Could you please review Just A fool. It is incomplete. There are only 5 chapters so far so can you read all. I want your opinion on what I can do to make it more interesting and capture readers.

Could you review my story The Fire in His Eyes??