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Tip: sound effects

We drove up the drive way *VROOM* *VROOM*!. He opened the car door *CLICK* and walked over to my side then opened the door.
"let's go inside" he says as we walk up the wooden stairs *STOMP* *CREEK* . His hand slaps my ass *SLAP* *JIGGLE* . Then we fucked on the piano * PIANO SOUNDS*

what the fuck!?!? No! Don't do that! That's a embarrassment to the universe! Stop with the damn sound effects!

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Comments

@ohshitdora!
i did? oh wow... ruff night I guess, honestly I can't remember anything up until the point of 1:00, lol

Waving_Snail
6/18/15

@Waving_Snail

fuck that!
wait - you commented yourself back? geeezzz you must be tired. and old people and golf? huh? I am so fucking lost.

ohshizdora!
6/18/15

@Waving_Snail
sorry... it dosnt make sene, I'm kinda tired.... what tine is it? FUCK ITS THREE, I HAVE TO GET UP IN LIKE THREE HOURS TO GO GOLFING BEFORE THE OLD PEOPLE TAKE OVER THE CORSE! shiiittttt.... fuck it Im already up this late, ill just be teasing my able-to-think-ness if I go to sleep for like , what, three more hours?

Waving_Snail
6/18/15

@ohshitdora!
I've been there, You know how many stores I ve started? 14. and only like 4 Ive kept, not including the 14 I put up and deleted. Now I just write to write and its a lot more fun the coping to he people to write what they want. Its such a rewarding sense of power when you write the story you want the way you want it instead of what the audience wants, ya know?

NOW LETS PARTY WITH SOME WRITING!