Rate: 8.5-9/10

I really enjoyed this story, but to get a better gip on it,I would need more chapters.

So far the grammar is pretty good. Just don't forget to press enter very time somebody starts to speak. Spelling was ok. Just remember it isn't fund, it is fond.

The chapters are sometimes hard to understand, especially when you split them into two districts. You also have a few too many characters. I love the plot, though. It is so original. Plus, I love the hunger games.

It would be nice to have some more background on the characters, too. like who they are, what they come from, etc.

I love the districts and home it goes basically from best to worst. It would be funny to add a district 6, for the Paul fans, lol. JK. Do NOT do that. Unless you want to.... Whatever.

It is a great story and I love it so far, just remember those key grammar rules, K?

Notes

Once again, my opinion, constructive criticism, and all that shit. Just remember that.