Story Reviews
Review 2: Sad, Beautiful, Tragic
Story Title: Sad, Beautiful, Tragic
Score Out Of Ten: 8
Explanation for Score: I honestly hate you a little bit... I haven't even read the prequel and already, no other author has given me as much feels as you have. This story is by far one of the best I've ever read. You took and ordinary plot and changed it into something that has never before been written and you've written it exceedingly well. There were some areas where you used incorrect punctuation, like adding extra commas.
I appreciate your use of the links. Some people over use them and have a story filled with pink words but you only showed what you felt was necessary. I don't like Taylor Swift at all but her part was so... ordinary that I didn't even mind.
I wasn't really a fan of the writing style in the first couple chapters. But I was so eager to read that I totally disregarded it. Your story pace is just about perfect, nothing rushing. I will definitely go back and read They Don't Know About Us and you've gained yourself a new subscriber! I only got through 4 chapters because of time and all but I will definitely get to the rest soon!
Writer's Screen Name: JustYourGal
Story Genre and Short Summary: Teen, Romance, Heartbreak, and Immense Crying Trigger is basically all throughout this story. Sad, Beautiful, Tragic is about a love affair between Harry Styles and Alexis Tomlinson. Alexis seems to see the fault in the stars and thinks she doesn't deserve Harry. They are both trying to live without each other, nursing broken hearts. Definitely and amazing read and make sure to check out the prequel, They Don't Know About Us.
Story Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/18736/Sad-Beautiful-Tragic/
Score Out Of Ten: 8
Explanation for Score: I honestly hate you a little bit... I haven't even read the prequel and already, no other author has given me as much feels as you have. This story is by far one of the best I've ever read. You took and ordinary plot and changed it into something that has never before been written and you've written it exceedingly well. There were some areas where you used incorrect punctuation, like adding extra commas.
I appreciate your use of the links. Some people over use them and have a story filled with pink words but you only showed what you felt was necessary. I don't like Taylor Swift at all but her part was so... ordinary that I didn't even mind.
I wasn't really a fan of the writing style in the first couple chapters. But I was so eager to read that I totally disregarded it. Your story pace is just about perfect, nothing rushing. I will definitely go back and read They Don't Know About Us and you've gained yourself a new subscriber! I only got through 4 chapters because of time and all but I will definitely get to the rest soon!
Writer's Screen Name: JustYourGal
Story Genre and Short Summary: Teen, Romance, Heartbreak, and Immense Crying Trigger is basically all throughout this story. Sad, Beautiful, Tragic is about a love affair between Harry Styles and Alexis Tomlinson. Alexis seems to see the fault in the stars and thinks she doesn't deserve Harry. They are both trying to live without each other, nursing broken hearts. Definitely and amazing read and make sure to check out the prequel, They Don't Know About Us.
Story Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/18736/Sad-Beautiful-Tragic/
@Kay_Baby
Ok, thanks, can't wait!!
11/19/14