Story Reviews by Foodaddict

Hmmm...ok.

So I really liked how it started. The first chapter recalling free me into the story. That's a good way to draw people in and keep them reading.

Ok so this was actually a good vampire story. Those are rate. Usually vampire stories are very cliche and boring. This one kept me intrigued.

But Marcel...Im just personally not a fan of Marcel stories. I think he is drastically overused, and just nope.

I give this story 4 out of 5 stars. Thank you, and keep writing!

Notes

Please don't take any of this personally. I mean it only as constructive criticism and am not a professional.