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Late

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i stand their looking at Thomas when i hear a scream coming from a few floors below.
'' shit" the doctor says running down the hallway
" what is going on?" Thomas yells
" i dont know" i say running after the doctor

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We arrive at the floor that my mum is on!
" mum!" i scream running towards her room
" help! her heart is not beating!" my father yell
" WHAT?!' i scream falling to the floor. i lay their and i curled into a ball whispering " mummy... oh mummy" i flood with tears. i start to hyperventilate and cough.

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The doctor comes out and shakes me
"NO! NO! NO GET OFF OF ME" i scream
" Little girl..." she says back
" STAY AWAY FROM ME! DONT TOUCH ME! dont touch me" i say to her pushing her hands off.
" ...she has passed... im very sorry"
i feel her breathing.everything goes silent. i have a short flash-back of everything that she has done. a tear rolls down my face.

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Hi

haleystyles haleystyles
5/2/14

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG JUST A FEW MORE CHAPTER TILL DA END!!!!!

Waving_Snail Waving_Snail
5/2/14

Hey y'all! There will be a "PART 3" and maybe even a "PART 4" or "PART 5"! So be ready!!!!!!

Waving_Snail Waving_Snail
4/27/14

@southern cutie
Thanks!

Waving_Snail Waving_Snail
3/23/14

Hiiiiiiii, I really love this story! The line that talked about eleamors death bed was really dramatic! I can't get over that! Keep updating PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!)?

southern cutie southern cutie
3/23/14