rate: 10

Believe it or not, I'm subscribed to this as well! I actually feel honored for you to ask me to rate your stories! I love the concept and how it is different. It's written very clearly and understandable, and again, it's realistic. The length of the chapters are perfect and I love, love, love that you keep your character list short and sweet. I hate having to go through 20 characters with a biography for each one. You give detail within the story so I can find out on my own.

I honestly can't think of much to say, you're on a great start and I'm excited for the next chapter! I just now read the chapter you just posted and I want to know what happens next!

Good job and good luck!

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