Author's Note

Left with Lux
rate: 10!

I am actually already subscribed to this story and I've really enjoyed it so far! Grammar and sentence structure is perfect with minor mistakes. I love the concept; it's so original and just fun. You make your characters playful yet believable. One thing I hate is when a story is unrealistic but yours is very realistic.

The only thing I really could think was, where is it going? At first it was Harry and Amanda fighting and then they got together which I loved. After a while I was confused as to where it was going but now the whole Kardashian thing is happening and it's extremely addicting! I can't wait for the next update :)

Unconditionally
rate: 10!

Another one I'm obsessed with! I'm also subscribed to this one! This story is also original and it always has me on the edge of my seat. I find myself literally laughing out loud when I'm reading this. Sometimes stories can make me chuckle but this makes me flat out laugh (like when Harry changes the contacts in her phone). You also balance the comedy and seriousness very well.

Again your grammar is perfect and I can't think of anything to criticize. I always hate ending a chapter because I know whatever comes next is going to be exciting as well. Keep going, I'm so excited for what's to come!

-A

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