Author's Note
Wolf
rate: 10
grammar: great!
idea: +
I read the first six chapters so far and I really like it! I haven't read any supernatural stories yet because I'm not really into those kinda things but this one is really great! I like how it starts and the direction it seems to be going. Because I haven't read all of it yet, I can't say too much but I'd like to know how and why Harry was put into the pack. He isn't a part of her family so I think an explanation would be good (I haven't read the whole thing so you may already have it in there)!
Grammar is pretty perfect from what I could see and I'm excited to continue!
Great job :)
grammar: great!
idea: +
I read the first six chapters so far and I really like it! I haven't read any supernatural stories yet because I'm not really into those kinda things but this one is really great! I like how it starts and the direction it seems to be going. Because I haven't read all of it yet, I can't say too much but I'd like to know how and why Harry was put into the pack. He isn't a part of her family so I think an explanation would be good (I haven't read the whole thing so you may already have it in there)!
Grammar is pretty perfect from what I could see and I'm excited to continue!
Great job :)
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