Author's Note
The Angel Wears Black
rate: 9.8
grammar: great
idea: +
I like this story and it's pretty original. At first I figured it was going to be very cliche: a girl moves to their country, but then it changed up a lot. I like how the boys help out with the choir class and how they're still a band. Overall it's a good start and I hope you keep writing!
The only thing I was really stuck on was "your". In certain situations it needed to be "you're". once you fix that you'll be good to go.
Happy Holidays and I hope this helped!
grammar: great
idea: +
I like this story and it's pretty original. At first I figured it was going to be very cliche: a girl moves to their country, but then it changed up a lot. I like how the boys help out with the choir class and how they're still a band. Overall it's a good start and I hope you keep writing!
The only thing I was really stuck on was "your". In certain situations it needed to be "you're". once you fix that you'll be good to go.
Happy Holidays and I hope this helped!
Can you please review my story just friends
4/16/16