Author's Note
Hiding In The Shadows
rate: 10
grammar: great!
idea: +
I really like this! It's different, interesting, and it makes me want to keep reading. Your grammar and spelling is perfect. I also like the title a lot because it's telling us what's going to happen.
The only suggestion I have is to not make the summary so long, especially if it's already in the story. I just felt like I was reading the same thing as the summary and I just needed to skim over it since I knew what it was going to say.
Other than that I really like it and I hope you keep going!
Happy Holidays!
grammar: great!
idea: +
I really like this! It's different, interesting, and it makes me want to keep reading. Your grammar and spelling is perfect. I also like the title a lot because it's telling us what's going to happen.
The only suggestion I have is to not make the summary so long, especially if it's already in the story. I just felt like I was reading the same thing as the summary and I just needed to skim over it since I knew what it was going to say.
Other than that I really like it and I hope you keep going!
Happy Holidays!
Can you please review my story just friends
4/16/16