rate: 9.5
idea: +
grammar: great


First, I haven't read the whole thing because I'm so tired right now but this is what I've gotten out of it:

I think this story is similar to others but it's really different at the same time which keeps it interesting....if that makes sense. Your grammar is awesome so thank you for that! The only thing I had trouble with was in the beginning how excited she was about having a child. It just seemed a little unrealistic for her to be so happy at first. Obviously everyone reacts differently but that was just my opinion! Keep going, I think you're on the right path!