Author's Note
Less Than Zero
rate: 10
idea: +
grammar: great!
advice:
I'm really loving this so far. I didn't read the whole thing but I think I'm going to really enjoy it. I love all of the detail. It's letting me picture everything in my head and that's what the reader needs. This story is original and interesting. I can't think of too many constructive things to say but just keep going and you have a new subscriber :)
idea: +
grammar: great!
advice:
I'm really loving this so far. I didn't read the whole thing but I think I'm going to really enjoy it. I love all of the detail. It's letting me picture everything in my head and that's what the reader needs. This story is original and interesting. I can't think of too many constructive things to say but just keep going and you have a new subscriber :)
Can you please review my story just friends
4/16/16