Author's Note

So there are a few problems and I couldn't read passed the first chapter before telling you what's up.

First, the biggest problem is I'm not going to be able to stop reading it because it's amazing. And second, I couldn't get passed the first chapter before telling you because I already know what I want to say...

Scare you? Hope so, I've always wanted to be a little like Simon Cowell. Haha, sorry that was mean.

Anyway, it's freakin' awesome from the first sentence all the way until the last of the first chapter! I can't wait to keep reading! Because this is a review I tried to pick some things to work on just because this is a review and no one wants a perfect review (at least I don't, I want something to work on). So here it is:

Basically the only thing I could really pick out was how you told us things that were either obvious or we would figure out on our own. For example, you told us how she cusses around Matt. We can already see that and you don't necessarily have to say it. However, I promise it didn't kill me.

So things you're doing amazing: detail, originality, grammar, and well, everything. If I had to compare your story to any other author I would definitely put you up there with Hazzagirl who has written Too Much, Don't Forget to Remember Me, and a few others because she's one of my favorite authors on here. Like I said, I've only read the first chapter but keep up what you're doing! I can't wait to keep reading!


Again, sorry for scaring you if I did but I just had to. I'm watching x-factor now and it's my dream...haha lovely story :)

-A

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