rate: 9.5
idea: +
grammar: okay
advice: 1


So I really love this story so far! I only read the first few chapters but I'm definitely going to keep going. You introduced the characters very well and I like how you are giving everyone's POVs. It's nice to know what everyone is thinking.

1. My only suggestion would be to make sure you are really checking for spelling and grammatical errors. That's one thing I always notice when reading!

Other than that I really am enjoying it!