Author's Note

So I just realized I just did a review for one of your other stories and I wish I put these together but I didn't....sorry. Haha.

Anyways, sorry if I repeat myself because I can't completely remember everything I said. To start, your grammar, structure, and spelling is once again great. I know from the multiple stories I have reviewed of yours you always have that spot on which is a huge turn on for readers. You also use great detail which adds depth to your stories and it's another great quality that will pull in more readers.

I think I mentioned this before but watch out for this:
"Sorry! Majenta never made it home last night. I tried to stay a little late to wait on her." She responded while pulling her apron over her head.
Try:
"Sorry! Majenta never made it home last night. I tried to stay a little late to wait on her," she responded while pulling her apron over her head.

So add a comma after 'her' rather than a period and keep 'she' lower cased.

I'm really trying hard to find something off but it's looking good right now. Just keep going and if you need anything else I'll try my best to help (along with specific questions)! I'm also super tired right now so I hope this was a good enough review! If not please let me know!

Happy writing :)

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