Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments
The Fire in His Eyes
Rating: ???
Okay, I couldn't really give you a rating because, all you have is the prologue and one chapter.
It was good so far, had some grammar and punctuation mistakes.
I couldn't really tell what the story is about though....
One thing I was surprised about, THERE WAS ACTUALLY FUCKING FIRE IN HIS EYES! 0o0
IS HE A DEMON?!
Haha, I'm kidding :P
But seriously, The prologue makes me want to keep reading.
Honestly, if you keep making things as interesting as the prologue in the rest of your chapters, I would rate this a 6-8.
But, if it gets boring, I would rate it like, 3-6.
You have to work on punctuation and grammar.
Keep up the good work!
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6/16/15