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Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments

Kissing problems No.2

Don't you hate it when:


He licked my bottom lip, asking for entrance. I gave it to him.
Our tongues battled for dominance.

First of all, THIS IS NOT DISNEYLAND!
Secondly: Dafuq is this?! WWE?!

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Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!

Subscribed and voted love <3

InValid InValid @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
6/16/15

XD like OMG you're so right! Which normal person would do that? Just give number to someone who just spilled its coffee on you! Normal reaction would be if he would be angry or if he would just go past her

mrs.Styles4ever mrs.Styles4ever
6/12/15

hahahha OMG lol I also really hate that

mrs.Styles4ever mrs.Styles4ever
6/12/15

Could you review Once In A Lifetime, by Mrs Clifford? I would really appreciate the feedback!

Mrs.Clifford Mrs.Clifford @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
5/23/15

Best thing I have ever read

NiallandI NiallandI @ NiallHoranFanfiction.com
1/27/15
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