Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments

RATING: 1


I'm sorry if I'm being harsh, but I didn't like anything about this story.
It's too obvious. I mean, the line that said:

'We're just going to sit around and talk about how we love 1D and how they'll never love us'

Gave it all away!

I mean, I wanted to just stop reading the whole story right there!

Secondly, It's WAY too rushed, my dear.

I mean, seriously!

And, you have bad grammar, also punctuation mistakes.
Along with the fact that NONE of the story is original.

And just on top of all of that, the chapters are SHORT!

And I mean REALLY short.

Enough said. I really don't have any advice for this story, but to delete it and make a new one.

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