Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments
The Devil in Disguise
RATING: 3
Okay, before you get all mad at me, I gave you this rating for a reason.
First of all, your punctuation and grammar, is off.
Secondly, the chapters were boring. I felt no life what-so-ever in those fighting scenes.
And in your chapters, it has the thoughts and the speaking mixed together and that REALLY bugs me.
Your chapters are short, and it seems boring.
Plus, I also hat when it says: "Growled into the phone" and then he growled back....
WAY too much growling....Welcome back to the Animal Planet everyone!
Notes
If you found this review disappointing or if it made you angry, I honestly cannot say sorry.I said I would give you cold, hard facts, and I would and am brutally honest.
~Crystal (UniqueMOFO)
Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!
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6/16/15