Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments
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I have come across a few- scratch that, ALOT of fan-fictions that are written like this:
"I like you, Angel." He looked at me. He had tears in his eyes. "I-I like you t-to Harry..."
And it just keeps going like that! it should look like this:
"I like you, Angel." He looked at me with tears in his eyes.
"I-I like you t-to Harry..."
And so on.
The first example makes me like this:
"I like you, Angel." He looked at me. He had tears in his eyes. "I-I like you t-to Harry..."
And it just keeps going like that! it should look like this:
"I like you, Angel." He looked at me with tears in his eyes.
"I-I like you t-to Harry..."
And so on.
The first example makes me like this:
Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!
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6/16/15