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The Best Mistake of My Life

Summary

Nialls POV

Liam I dont want to go!!!!! Liam patts my back and nodds his head up and down. He had a sad look on his face like he didn't want to either. We had no choice it was either moving to Palm Springs or staying homeless. Of course we would pick Palm Springs!!!! When we get there we go to the gas station and get a lottery ticket. We both got two and we have to wait for the numbers to come out. When I was looking threw the food section I saw this Beautiful girl standing right by me. I was so neverous to talk to her until i made my move..........

Characters

Liam Payne

The hottie :) ( Not famous in story ) Also likes Meldoy

Melody Carrillo

Best friends with Trista......Also likes Liam

Niall Horan

The Sexy Man we all know ( Not famous in the story ) Also likes Trista

Trista Smith

Best friends with Melody age..17 (main Character) Also likes Niall

Chapters

Chapter 1

READ THE SUMMERY BEFORE THIS STORYYY!!!!!
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

Comments

First thing don't say a lot of likes and explain a little better.but I like the story don't go directly into something like with the girlfriend thing that made no sense.But it does have a Good story line keep up the God work.@trissyinca

Niallerlove
12/14/13

You can tell this is a good story line, but dont go over the top like other writers. Oh! Also, remember punctuation because some times it doesn't make sense. Other than that keep up the good work, hun! xx