The Best Mistake of My Life - Comments

First thing don't say a lot of likes and explain a little better.but I like the story don't go directly into something like with the girlfriend thing that made no sense.But it does have a Good story line keep up the God work.@trissyinca

You can tell this is a good story line, but dont go over the top like other writers. Oh! Also, remember punctuation because some times it doesn't make sense. Other than that keep up the good work, hun! xx